Thank you for reading our NARRATIVES! Students enjoyed writing a story about animals. They went through the process of brainstorming ideas, planning, writing a rough draft, editing, revising, and sharing with the class. These stories are not perfect, but we know we learn through our mistakes and continue to grow with each piece of writing we publish. We hope you enjoy each one!
The Lost Dog
by Brandon
One day are dog Coba was outside. I called his name and he did not come. I was worried he was gone. I called his name again. No answer. I got his dog treats. I shuck bag up rattle, rattle, rattle. He was no wear to be seen! My aunt and my mom got in her car and looked and they could not find him. They drove around and asked people. He has fluffy gray fur with white spots. He is a cuddly, cute big dog. My dog makes anyone feel happy when he licks you. Adventurers hider super playful with kids, a good dog with a super heart. My mom and my aunt came back with no dog. I was sadder than ever. It was the next day I had to go to school. I did not want to go, I wanted to stay home and look for my dog. So I hid under my bed until school started but mom found me and I went to school. It was a ruff day at school but it was over. I rushed inside then went to the back door. I looked for him until nightfall but I had school so I gave up looking for him and went to bed. The next day when I was getting ready for school I asked “ Can you look for Coba?” She said yes my face grew with excitement. I said thank you mom. The next day I didn't have school. I went outside and said, “ I really do wish he was here.” I really miss my furry fur ball but we will find him one day I really hope so. The next day I ate breakfast and played on my Xbox.I got bored and went outside to play. It was hot so I went inside. I got a cup of water gulp, gulp and made my way out the door. What I found out there you will never believe it h-h-he was back! My dog is back. And we lived happily ever after .
by Brandon
One day are dog Coba was outside. I called his name and he did not come. I was worried he was gone. I called his name again. No answer. I got his dog treats. I shuck bag up rattle, rattle, rattle. He was no wear to be seen! My aunt and my mom got in her car and looked and they could not find him. They drove around and asked people. He has fluffy gray fur with white spots. He is a cuddly, cute big dog. My dog makes anyone feel happy when he licks you. Adventurers hider super playful with kids, a good dog with a super heart. My mom and my aunt came back with no dog. I was sadder than ever. It was the next day I had to go to school. I did not want to go, I wanted to stay home and look for my dog. So I hid under my bed until school started but mom found me and I went to school. It was a ruff day at school but it was over. I rushed inside then went to the back door. I looked for him until nightfall but I had school so I gave up looking for him and went to bed. The next day when I was getting ready for school I asked “ Can you look for Coba?” She said yes my face grew with excitement. I said thank you mom. The next day I didn't have school. I went outside and said, “ I really do wish he was here.” I really miss my furry fur ball but we will find him one day I really hope so. The next day I ate breakfast and played on my Xbox.I got bored and went outside to play. It was hot so I went inside. I got a cup of water gulp, gulp and made my way out the door. What I found out there you will never believe it h-h-he was back! My dog is back. And we lived happily ever after .
The Life of my Fish
By: Drake
It was a cold gloomy night when we picked up my sister from her friends house. She got in the car and so did a noise of fins swaying. I looked over at my sister and all I saw was a box in her hands. When we pulled up to our house my sister took the box to the kitchen and filled it up with water. I was shocked when I saw a blue fish swimming in the cold water of his fish bowl!I asked what his name was and he didn't have one yet. After that she said I could name him and I did. His name was Otto Gerald Uno. We put the stuff in the fish bowl and when we were done we put him back in his fish bowl. He decided that a green plant would be his home! The only things he did was eat, and swim around his green plant/home. After a while it was christmas again and even Otto got to participate! After are presents it was time for otto's presents. He got a new purple plant and a deep sea diver sculpture! Then we realized Otto was scared of the deep sea diver sculpture. Then he started to make friends with the sculpture but then everything went down river. We looked one day and a tiny chunk of his head was floating in the water! Otto was still alive but it was getting worse! I wondered what was going to happen to him? We worried until his home was the only thing left of him. I was sad but it had to happen eventually even though we don’t want it to. I knew he was beside me and my sister even when the darkest of days arose. Everytime I see water I see his reflection of the first time we met him. His life close to the end was a sad waterfall for me and my sister but I know he's there with me and my sister and I don't have to worry anymore. And my dad helped me get through it while he moved his bowl and his plants, water, and rocks. We worked through the problem of Otto dieing and if I could have done anything else with Otto it would be to take more care and maybe make him live longer. Me and my sister will never forget his death and the reason he died. My dad was the one who flushed him down the toilet through the pipe and into the sewer. But the memories we had were some memories that no one could forget and I never did. He might be just a memory now but to me he is the fish I know everyone would love if they were able to see him before he died. And now without him it might be sad but at least the worst didn't come to us but the worst came to him and he deserves respect for making a sacrifice for the greater good. He made a change to my life at that very second and minute it happened without a trace! We will never forget you, Otto. Never will anyone.
By: Drake
It was a cold gloomy night when we picked up my sister from her friends house. She got in the car and so did a noise of fins swaying. I looked over at my sister and all I saw was a box in her hands. When we pulled up to our house my sister took the box to the kitchen and filled it up with water. I was shocked when I saw a blue fish swimming in the cold water of his fish bowl!I asked what his name was and he didn't have one yet. After that she said I could name him and I did. His name was Otto Gerald Uno. We put the stuff in the fish bowl and when we were done we put him back in his fish bowl. He decided that a green plant would be his home! The only things he did was eat, and swim around his green plant/home. After a while it was christmas again and even Otto got to participate! After are presents it was time for otto's presents. He got a new purple plant and a deep sea diver sculpture! Then we realized Otto was scared of the deep sea diver sculpture. Then he started to make friends with the sculpture but then everything went down river. We looked one day and a tiny chunk of his head was floating in the water! Otto was still alive but it was getting worse! I wondered what was going to happen to him? We worried until his home was the only thing left of him. I was sad but it had to happen eventually even though we don’t want it to. I knew he was beside me and my sister even when the darkest of days arose. Everytime I see water I see his reflection of the first time we met him. His life close to the end was a sad waterfall for me and my sister but I know he's there with me and my sister and I don't have to worry anymore. And my dad helped me get through it while he moved his bowl and his plants, water, and rocks. We worked through the problem of Otto dieing and if I could have done anything else with Otto it would be to take more care and maybe make him live longer. Me and my sister will never forget his death and the reason he died. My dad was the one who flushed him down the toilet through the pipe and into the sewer. But the memories we had were some memories that no one could forget and I never did. He might be just a memory now but to me he is the fish I know everyone would love if they were able to see him before he died. And now without him it might be sad but at least the worst didn't come to us but the worst came to him and he deserves respect for making a sacrifice for the greater good. He made a change to my life at that very second and minute it happened without a trace! We will never forget you, Otto. Never will anyone.
By: Renee
A Bunny In My Closet
One beautiful morning I let my bunny get his exercise. My family was looking for my bunny. I asked if he got outside. They said no. “Cuddles!” I yelled. No bunny. Then I heard a BANG! BOOM! and other strange noises. We heard a clatter. I went to check the bedrooms. The noise got louder each time I got closer to my room. I was too creeped out to go in. I asked my brother Alex to go in. So he went in. The noise suddenly stopped when he got to my bed. I wished I could feel my bunny’s slick fluffy fur. He has the cutest brown eyes. When I look at his eyes I see a sparkle. He has white slick fur with brown spots. “I miss feeding my bunny and giving him water,” I said. He would jump on the couch and hop on my lap. I would always hear scratches at my door but this time it came from the closet. Each time I got closer to the closet the noise got louder. I was so scared! But right when I put my hand on the doorknob I took it right off. “Just open it!” I said to myself. So I opened the door. I saw a brown and white fur ball. So I picked up the fur ball and I looked at it like it was a new toy. My eyes filled with tears of joy. I was so excited to see my lop eared bunny. He looked so sad. I put him in his pen. I also gave him food and water. He looked more excited than me when I got him! My face was filled with joy and he was thumping with joy. I gave him extra lettis. A few days later my brother told me that my bunny got outside! I was shaking with fear. I started to cry. I tried thinking of something else. I ran to my bunny’s pen and looked inside. My bunny was still inside his pen. I had v-shaped eyebrows. I ran to my brother and he was laughing. I threw a stuffed animal across the room. He ran all the way outside! I ran and hugged my bunny lightly. I love my fuzzy friend. I've decided to keep my closet door closed from now on. I hope he doesn't go into my brother's closet now.
A Bunny In My Closet
One beautiful morning I let my bunny get his exercise. My family was looking for my bunny. I asked if he got outside. They said no. “Cuddles!” I yelled. No bunny. Then I heard a BANG! BOOM! and other strange noises. We heard a clatter. I went to check the bedrooms. The noise got louder each time I got closer to my room. I was too creeped out to go in. I asked my brother Alex to go in. So he went in. The noise suddenly stopped when he got to my bed. I wished I could feel my bunny’s slick fluffy fur. He has the cutest brown eyes. When I look at his eyes I see a sparkle. He has white slick fur with brown spots. “I miss feeding my bunny and giving him water,” I said. He would jump on the couch and hop on my lap. I would always hear scratches at my door but this time it came from the closet. Each time I got closer to the closet the noise got louder. I was so scared! But right when I put my hand on the doorknob I took it right off. “Just open it!” I said to myself. So I opened the door. I saw a brown and white fur ball. So I picked up the fur ball and I looked at it like it was a new toy. My eyes filled with tears of joy. I was so excited to see my lop eared bunny. He looked so sad. I put him in his pen. I also gave him food and water. He looked more excited than me when I got him! My face was filled with joy and he was thumping with joy. I gave him extra lettis. A few days later my brother told me that my bunny got outside! I was shaking with fear. I started to cry. I tried thinking of something else. I ran to my bunny’s pen and looked inside. My bunny was still inside his pen. I had v-shaped eyebrows. I ran to my brother and he was laughing. I threw a stuffed animal across the room. He ran all the way outside! I ran and hugged my bunny lightly. I love my fuzzy friend. I've decided to keep my closet door closed from now on. I hope he doesn't go into my brother's closet now.
Hayden
Buddy The dog
Buddy is friendly. He is a good boy. When we leave Buddy he wines.He also loves to play. He is 9 weeks old. Buddy is 11 or 12 weeks old now. He is loving. He is a puppy. He is big. He loves to go to the lake. He is heavy. Buddy is brown and black he is fluffy he is mean he also loves to sleep. He loves to run. When we got back home I opened my door and ran as fast as I could because there was a fluffy little thing cacing me. But that fluffy little thing was big he was about 20 pounds. He is vishes. He is chunky and fast.His teeth are sharp he finally caught me.That trickey little thing. He barks so loud it hurts my ears. He is hungry so i gave him sum food. Then we started playing a gen. He got sleepy so we went to bed. He got to sleep inside of the house. We got up and ate some pizza that was good thank you. Do hall want some more pizza we literally ate pizza 1 hour ago. It is good. Ok i will eat some pizza and hot wings and im not eating any more after this. My face was purple looking because they wanted to eat every single hour. We looked like we were about to pop. I want more pizza and hot wings ok lets go to house of pizza since it is 2 minutes away from here lets go pop and nan it is right there its on the side park right there hurry its about to close it is closing in 20 minutes lets sit right there ok lets do it can we have 5 waters and 1 pepperoni pizza and 1 cheese pizza and hot wings thank would you like some hot sas yes mam 1 or 2 2 will be fin thank you your walkem. Can we have some more water please mam yes you can. Let's go home now its dark out here. I got some good sleep so did Buddy all of us got some good sleep last night. Poppy nanny we need some groceries from the store. We will in a little bit ok. Buddy loves water. Do you want to go to the park. Lets go get some treats` toys` food`bed`clothing`cage`water. When we got home i herd a scratch scratch at the door i slowly crept up to the door and there was a baby deer something hade got a hold of it so I bring it in side to take care of it. I gave him food and water. He was thirsty and hungry. 9 or 10 minutes later i herd a bang bang nouse on the front door it was loud enough for me to hear it. I also heard a scratch scratch on the door. The scratch scratch I herd was a cat at the back door. but there was a amazon person at the front door. Buddy what are you barking at I opened the door for Buddy he took off running to go and go get what evere he was barking at he was barking at a mouse, a bird,a scarle, a dog. Buddy let go of that mouse. Let it go let go of it NOW. Thank you for letting it go good boy but a bad boy at the same time. Buddy what do you think your doing on my bed you have a dog bed right over there Buddy. It is probably softer than my bed. Buddy come here. Sit speak if you want your treat. Ruf good boy your a good boy Buddy yes you are. Ruf what you want you want outside tell me if you want to go out side ruf ruf your such a good boy. Squeak squeak do you want it if you want it come in side. Your eyes are like dark blue tape. But your fur is dark as dirt but your feet is like clear water that just came out of a hose. Your so big and heavy gesis crist. How do you gan 9 or 10 pounds a week. You got so much faster. Holy cow what are you eating 5 scopes a day. How is he getting faster but not taller that's weird. What ever. I went in my bed to watch a fishing video and made me a glass of water and i put it right be side me. Lets watch one more fishing video. That was a good video. Lets go see what Buddies doing. How are you a sleep. You was a sleep 1 or 2 hours ago. I don't Know what to do now i can go out side or i could watch something like a movie or a video. Lets watch a youtube video we have a whole bunch of options here. Lets see here that is a perfect video. I love this video. Its dark now and its 9:30 pm it is 30 minutes past my bed time it is 30 minutes past buddies bed time to.
Buddy The dog
Buddy is friendly. He is a good boy. When we leave Buddy he wines.He also loves to play. He is 9 weeks old. Buddy is 11 or 12 weeks old now. He is loving. He is a puppy. He is big. He loves to go to the lake. He is heavy. Buddy is brown and black he is fluffy he is mean he also loves to sleep. He loves to run. When we got back home I opened my door and ran as fast as I could because there was a fluffy little thing cacing me. But that fluffy little thing was big he was about 20 pounds. He is vishes. He is chunky and fast.His teeth are sharp he finally caught me.That trickey little thing. He barks so loud it hurts my ears. He is hungry so i gave him sum food. Then we started playing a gen. He got sleepy so we went to bed. He got to sleep inside of the house. We got up and ate some pizza that was good thank you. Do hall want some more pizza we literally ate pizza 1 hour ago. It is good. Ok i will eat some pizza and hot wings and im not eating any more after this. My face was purple looking because they wanted to eat every single hour. We looked like we were about to pop. I want more pizza and hot wings ok lets go to house of pizza since it is 2 minutes away from here lets go pop and nan it is right there its on the side park right there hurry its about to close it is closing in 20 minutes lets sit right there ok lets do it can we have 5 waters and 1 pepperoni pizza and 1 cheese pizza and hot wings thank would you like some hot sas yes mam 1 or 2 2 will be fin thank you your walkem. Can we have some more water please mam yes you can. Let's go home now its dark out here. I got some good sleep so did Buddy all of us got some good sleep last night. Poppy nanny we need some groceries from the store. We will in a little bit ok. Buddy loves water. Do you want to go to the park. Lets go get some treats` toys` food`bed`clothing`cage`water. When we got home i herd a scratch scratch at the door i slowly crept up to the door and there was a baby deer something hade got a hold of it so I bring it in side to take care of it. I gave him food and water. He was thirsty and hungry. 9 or 10 minutes later i herd a bang bang nouse on the front door it was loud enough for me to hear it. I also heard a scratch scratch on the door. The scratch scratch I herd was a cat at the back door. but there was a amazon person at the front door. Buddy what are you barking at I opened the door for Buddy he took off running to go and go get what evere he was barking at he was barking at a mouse, a bird,a scarle, a dog. Buddy let go of that mouse. Let it go let go of it NOW. Thank you for letting it go good boy but a bad boy at the same time. Buddy what do you think your doing on my bed you have a dog bed right over there Buddy. It is probably softer than my bed. Buddy come here. Sit speak if you want your treat. Ruf good boy your a good boy Buddy yes you are. Ruf what you want you want outside tell me if you want to go out side ruf ruf your such a good boy. Squeak squeak do you want it if you want it come in side. Your eyes are like dark blue tape. But your fur is dark as dirt but your feet is like clear water that just came out of a hose. Your so big and heavy gesis crist. How do you gan 9 or 10 pounds a week. You got so much faster. Holy cow what are you eating 5 scopes a day. How is he getting faster but not taller that's weird. What ever. I went in my bed to watch a fishing video and made me a glass of water and i put it right be side me. Lets watch one more fishing video. That was a good video. Lets go see what Buddies doing. How are you a sleep. You was a sleep 1 or 2 hours ago. I don't Know what to do now i can go out side or i could watch something like a movie or a video. Lets watch a youtube video we have a whole bunch of options here. Lets see here that is a perfect video. I love this video. Its dark now and its 9:30 pm it is 30 minutes past my bed time it is 30 minutes past buddies bed time to.
Natalie
The Christmas Story
One day l was in bed. I heard a knock on my door. Knock, knock, knock. I went to go see who it was. My dad said, “Get in the car! “ “Ok” I said .We pulled up to the gas station. There was a small dog .The girl walked up to us and gave the dog to me. Ruff, ruff, ruff! I gave her my crackers . We went home and Ella came for a play date . We played all day. I named her Molly. She loves belly scratches. She has a squirrel toy. She is black and white. This was the best Christmas day ever! I decided to get Molly a present. I got Molly a leash. We went outside and Molly got away from me. Oh no! My heart was beating and my legs were shaking! I said, “ No Molly as she chased a car . I caught her and took her and we went inside. Mom made us good pancakes, mmm. We got to open up presents . Molly got a squeaky pig. Omg I got a doll ! Molly is still cuter than the doll. Mom got a bag . We had the best Christmas day ever!
The Christmas Story
One day l was in bed. I heard a knock on my door. Knock, knock, knock. I went to go see who it was. My dad said, “Get in the car! “ “Ok” I said .We pulled up to the gas station. There was a small dog .The girl walked up to us and gave the dog to me. Ruff, ruff, ruff! I gave her my crackers . We went home and Ella came for a play date . We played all day. I named her Molly. She loves belly scratches. She has a squirrel toy. She is black and white. This was the best Christmas day ever! I decided to get Molly a present. I got Molly a leash. We went outside and Molly got away from me. Oh no! My heart was beating and my legs were shaking! I said, “ No Molly as she chased a car . I caught her and took her and we went inside. Mom made us good pancakes, mmm. We got to open up presents . Molly got a squeaky pig. Omg I got a doll ! Molly is still cuter than the doll. Mom got a bag . We had the best Christmas day ever!
Powell
Rooster the Sheepdog
MOO!BAA!BAAK! Sorry, about this! I just need a second to wrangle up these animals. “C’mon! Get your wagging tails in there!”. Okay, sorry. Let me introduce myself. The name’s Rooster and I’m the sheepdog here at Cloverfield Farm.
Oh! Uh, huh! Phew! I’m sorry it’s just been a bit of a struggle here at Cloverfield. But, anyways here’s how a was adopted. Two random people were walking down the street. As they passed the pound, a nine year old boy named Trevor said “Aw, look Momma!”. “Yes, very cute, now come on or we’ll be late for church.” Trevor’s Mom said. Believe it or not this was my first chance to get adopted and I went for it. Before they walked away, I managed to get my puppy eyes going. It worked! I knew that because when they walked in Trevor said “We’ll take the little guy in there.” “Which one? There’s like nine of the little dudes, shorty.” Mike the pup carer said. Mike has been my best bud. Well, I mean he still is. “The milky way eyes and silky fur?” Trevor’s Mom described me as. “$186 .99” Mike replied. When they brought me home they named me Milky Way. Then, they renamed me Rooster.
Howdy! Remember when I said--- wait one barrel rollin’ second. What the liver is that shadowy figure on the hill in the horizon? Well I’ll be darn! I’ll have to deal with that tomorrow. Right now, I need to rest my eyes.
I’ve been seeing that dog on weirdo all week, in the same place, on the hill. What am I gonna do?! On a day that ends with “y”, I saw a cooked beef sandwich with puperonies on the side. Wait what? No! I saw the trespasser as clear as a baked potato sundae. I decided to go to the hill to tell that big tailed weenie dog to mosey on off my turf. So, I told him to mosey on. Then he replies “Howdy, Pete. The name’s Cowboy!” As more and more frustration poured into my body. “Now listen here mutt---” “Fox!” he interrupted me. “Mutt-fox you’re gonna mosey off my turf or by 4:00 PM you’ll be choking on 2 sticks of puperoni. And you’ll be lucky if I don’t throw in some real sticks.” As I walked back to the barn house, I turned around and saw Cowboy limp off into the sunset. Then I felt kinda bad so I went to go say sorry. Ten minutes later, I found him and invited him to live with me. And in return for letting him stay, he helped me patrol the farm.
Then, we did some amazing things together. We kept the mice out of the corn silo. We kept the snakes away from the chicken eggs. We were the Duos of Danger, the Ambassadors of arachnids, we were the Sheepdogs of Cloverfield! Then one night we found the jackpot. We found a thief.
It was a cool fall night and me and Cowboy had been rolling the pumpkins to the veggie chamber. We were tired from moving the pumpkins and Cowboy’s head hurt from rolling all those pumpkins. As we made our way to the dog house, we saw a thief. He was breaking in the cow pen. “WOW!!” Cowboy said. “Okay, we have to approach this very shifty.” I whispered. “Whatever!” Cowboy said as he charged at the thief. I went around the corn silo and I planned to pounce on him from behind. Cowboy stuck up his leg. “Target locked and loaded!” Cowboy said. “FIRE!” Cowboy shouted. PSSSSSSS. “MAMA MIA!” the thief said. “I just work with our owner!!” the Italian man said. We brought him in the house to check with Mr. Cloverfield, my owner. Turns out he did work for Mr. Cloverfield. He paid him to be a practice thief in order to train us to patrol the farm better.The result of the practice thief was the Duos of Danger became stronger, and stronger. From then on we had many marvelous adventures.
Rooster the Sheepdog
MOO!BAA!BAAK! Sorry, about this! I just need a second to wrangle up these animals. “C’mon! Get your wagging tails in there!”. Okay, sorry. Let me introduce myself. The name’s Rooster and I’m the sheepdog here at Cloverfield Farm.
Oh! Uh, huh! Phew! I’m sorry it’s just been a bit of a struggle here at Cloverfield. But, anyways here’s how a was adopted. Two random people were walking down the street. As they passed the pound, a nine year old boy named Trevor said “Aw, look Momma!”. “Yes, very cute, now come on or we’ll be late for church.” Trevor’s Mom said. Believe it or not this was my first chance to get adopted and I went for it. Before they walked away, I managed to get my puppy eyes going. It worked! I knew that because when they walked in Trevor said “We’ll take the little guy in there.” “Which one? There’s like nine of the little dudes, shorty.” Mike the pup carer said. Mike has been my best bud. Well, I mean he still is. “The milky way eyes and silky fur?” Trevor’s Mom described me as. “$186 .99” Mike replied. When they brought me home they named me Milky Way. Then, they renamed me Rooster.
Howdy! Remember when I said--- wait one barrel rollin’ second. What the liver is that shadowy figure on the hill in the horizon? Well I’ll be darn! I’ll have to deal with that tomorrow. Right now, I need to rest my eyes.
I’ve been seeing that dog on weirdo all week, in the same place, on the hill. What am I gonna do?! On a day that ends with “y”, I saw a cooked beef sandwich with puperonies on the side. Wait what? No! I saw the trespasser as clear as a baked potato sundae. I decided to go to the hill to tell that big tailed weenie dog to mosey on off my turf. So, I told him to mosey on. Then he replies “Howdy, Pete. The name’s Cowboy!” As more and more frustration poured into my body. “Now listen here mutt---” “Fox!” he interrupted me. “Mutt-fox you’re gonna mosey off my turf or by 4:00 PM you’ll be choking on 2 sticks of puperoni. And you’ll be lucky if I don’t throw in some real sticks.” As I walked back to the barn house, I turned around and saw Cowboy limp off into the sunset. Then I felt kinda bad so I went to go say sorry. Ten minutes later, I found him and invited him to live with me. And in return for letting him stay, he helped me patrol the farm.
Then, we did some amazing things together. We kept the mice out of the corn silo. We kept the snakes away from the chicken eggs. We were the Duos of Danger, the Ambassadors of arachnids, we were the Sheepdogs of Cloverfield! Then one night we found the jackpot. We found a thief.
It was a cool fall night and me and Cowboy had been rolling the pumpkins to the veggie chamber. We were tired from moving the pumpkins and Cowboy’s head hurt from rolling all those pumpkins. As we made our way to the dog house, we saw a thief. He was breaking in the cow pen. “WOW!!” Cowboy said. “Okay, we have to approach this very shifty.” I whispered. “Whatever!” Cowboy said as he charged at the thief. I went around the corn silo and I planned to pounce on him from behind. Cowboy stuck up his leg. “Target locked and loaded!” Cowboy said. “FIRE!” Cowboy shouted. PSSSSSSS. “MAMA MIA!” the thief said. “I just work with our owner!!” the Italian man said. We brought him in the house to check with Mr. Cloverfield, my owner. Turns out he did work for Mr. Cloverfield. He paid him to be a practice thief in order to train us to patrol the farm better.The result of the practice thief was the Duos of Danger became stronger, and stronger. From then on we had many marvelous adventures.
Rileigh
Adopting Baylee
“ Come here Baylee go get squeaky go get it. Good boy good boy,” I said to my puppy. Squeak, squeak. Arr, arr. Hey that was my puppy Baylee, and he is the cutest little puppy in the world. When my family got him I was at a friend’s birthday party with my brother. When I got back all I could think about was me and the floppy eared smooth puppy cuddling up with me. My puppy is only 8 weeks old . One thing I don’t really like is that he is a biter, sometimes it tickles and sometimes it hurts really bad. My puppy is small and won’t get much bigger. “Lunch is ready,” my mom said “okay coming,” I said. Stay there Baylee I’m going to eat Baylee ran to his bowl no boy I’m eatin not you arr arr huh. “Mmm that sandwich was good,” I said “thanks but Rileigh you have got to take responsibility for this dog” “okay what do I have to do” “well he is only a puppy so take him out every 30 minutes he isn’t potty trained yet and feed him twice a day, but I will help with everything okay” “okay. Did you spill water in the carpet?” “no,” my mom said, “Did you spill your coke in the carpet right here,” “No, my brother said.” I Scratched my head. I was so confused but then I looked at Baylee. He looked at me, looked down then scooted away with guilty eyes. I went and got a rag and some spray. I called Baylee as my voice rumbled. My eyes darkened and my face turned red. I played with him and this is what he gives me. “What did he do,” my mom said “he used the restroom in the house” “whoop him and take him out I’ll get the mess up” my mom said “okay,” I said. I got back in and my mom said, “ he is gonna use the restroom in the house but that's what you gotta do when he does.” “okay we will make sure we do that.” I said ANK ANK, NO BAYLEE that's what I said for weeks who am I kidding I probably said that for 1 and a half months and then one day he did something unexpected he went to the door I opened it and he ran faster than a 3 cheetah put together and then he used the restroom. We both rushed back in. I screamed my lungs out “MAMA MAMA” he used the restroom outside. He told me he went to the door. I opened the door. He rushed out and used the restroom. Do you know how happy I am? I have said no to Baylee so much. I wanna here yes for the rest of my life” “calm down. He still isn't potty trained. He is still going to have accidents. In maybe 2 to 3 weeks though he’ll probably be potty trained,” my mom said. He did have a lot more accidents but he’s potty trained now. I figured out a way to have fun and not have accidents in the house we are playing outside so that we can play and he could use the restroom if needed. Go get it boy go get squeaky good boy bring it back bring it back good boy now go get squeaky you can’t have it you can’t have it arr grrrrrr come on let's go inside. Well even though sometimes you need to clean up messes never ever give up and here's a hint there sometimes gonna have some accident but it's okay. Baylee, no were inside and we have been outside for an hour and a half.
Adopting Baylee
“ Come here Baylee go get squeaky go get it. Good boy good boy,” I said to my puppy. Squeak, squeak. Arr, arr. Hey that was my puppy Baylee, and he is the cutest little puppy in the world. When my family got him I was at a friend’s birthday party with my brother. When I got back all I could think about was me and the floppy eared smooth puppy cuddling up with me. My puppy is only 8 weeks old . One thing I don’t really like is that he is a biter, sometimes it tickles and sometimes it hurts really bad. My puppy is small and won’t get much bigger. “Lunch is ready,” my mom said “okay coming,” I said. Stay there Baylee I’m going to eat Baylee ran to his bowl no boy I’m eatin not you arr arr huh. “Mmm that sandwich was good,” I said “thanks but Rileigh you have got to take responsibility for this dog” “okay what do I have to do” “well he is only a puppy so take him out every 30 minutes he isn’t potty trained yet and feed him twice a day, but I will help with everything okay” “okay. Did you spill water in the carpet?” “no,” my mom said, “Did you spill your coke in the carpet right here,” “No, my brother said.” I Scratched my head. I was so confused but then I looked at Baylee. He looked at me, looked down then scooted away with guilty eyes. I went and got a rag and some spray. I called Baylee as my voice rumbled. My eyes darkened and my face turned red. I played with him and this is what he gives me. “What did he do,” my mom said “he used the restroom in the house” “whoop him and take him out I’ll get the mess up” my mom said “okay,” I said. I got back in and my mom said, “ he is gonna use the restroom in the house but that's what you gotta do when he does.” “okay we will make sure we do that.” I said ANK ANK, NO BAYLEE that's what I said for weeks who am I kidding I probably said that for 1 and a half months and then one day he did something unexpected he went to the door I opened it and he ran faster than a 3 cheetah put together and then he used the restroom. We both rushed back in. I screamed my lungs out “MAMA MAMA” he used the restroom outside. He told me he went to the door. I opened the door. He rushed out and used the restroom. Do you know how happy I am? I have said no to Baylee so much. I wanna here yes for the rest of my life” “calm down. He still isn't potty trained. He is still going to have accidents. In maybe 2 to 3 weeks though he’ll probably be potty trained,” my mom said. He did have a lot more accidents but he’s potty trained now. I figured out a way to have fun and not have accidents in the house we are playing outside so that we can play and he could use the restroom if needed. Go get it boy go get squeaky good boy bring it back bring it back good boy now go get squeaky you can’t have it you can’t have it arr grrrrrr come on let's go inside. Well even though sometimes you need to clean up messes never ever give up and here's a hint there sometimes gonna have some accident but it's okay. Baylee, no were inside and we have been outside for an hour and a half.
by Easton
Getting Opal
I jump out of bed and I go over to my closet like a cheetah attacking its prey and I got ready. Then I ran to eat and went to play with my friend Jt. Also my dad came out and happily said, “We are getting a dog tonight from my friend!” So Jt and I played on the trampoline and on our bikes till 7:30. After we hit the road and it took about thirty minutes to get there but we just listened to music till we got there. When we got there I saw her and my dad's friend said, “She is two years old.” I thought she looked like a fluffy fur ball. She had waves of black fur and she felt like cotton. Also she was so hyper as she zoomed akros the yard looking like a rocket! Secondly she has long fur like a lion's mane. Then my dad's buddy said, “She is a teacup poodle, ”. When I jumped down on all fours and she howled, “Aroooooo ''. Then I said, “She is the one.” Next my dad’s buddy said, “She is free because no one's life is money, it is family.” So I picked the fluffy monster and got in the front seat of the truck. Then we started home but her face drowned in sadness and she started whining. So I started petting her and I hugged her and her tail started to wagg 1,000 mph. So we got home and faces lit up and my new furry little sister ran over to my other sister Selah. Then we played with her till we decided to let her meet Charlie, who was also her new sister! They loved each other and played together till it was time to hit the hay. In the morning I ate some waffles and had some milk. The next day Opal came into the living room and my face lit up like the sun rising and I hoped that our family would last forever. [:D
Getting Opal
I jump out of bed and I go over to my closet like a cheetah attacking its prey and I got ready. Then I ran to eat and went to play with my friend Jt. Also my dad came out and happily said, “We are getting a dog tonight from my friend!” So Jt and I played on the trampoline and on our bikes till 7:30. After we hit the road and it took about thirty minutes to get there but we just listened to music till we got there. When we got there I saw her and my dad's friend said, “She is two years old.” I thought she looked like a fluffy fur ball. She had waves of black fur and she felt like cotton. Also she was so hyper as she zoomed akros the yard looking like a rocket! Secondly she has long fur like a lion's mane. Then my dad's buddy said, “She is a teacup poodle, ”. When I jumped down on all fours and she howled, “Aroooooo ''. Then I said, “She is the one.” Next my dad’s buddy said, “She is free because no one's life is money, it is family.” So I picked the fluffy monster and got in the front seat of the truck. Then we started home but her face drowned in sadness and she started whining. So I started petting her and I hugged her and her tail started to wagg 1,000 mph. So we got home and faces lit up and my new furry little sister ran over to my other sister Selah. Then we played with her till we decided to let her meet Charlie, who was also her new sister! They loved each other and played together till it was time to hit the hay. In the morning I ate some waffles and had some milk. The next day Opal came into the living room and my face lit up like the sun rising and I hoped that our family would last forever. [:D
by Rylie
“ Crack Crack no Precious stop doing that!” Precious is my guinea pig. I have had her now for a while. I was 8 when I got her. I tried to beg my mom for a guinea pig. But she said “ no no no.” So then my dad said maybe I could have a guinea pig. Then I was like “yes yes.” Then we went to the pet store. The one I looked at was as tiny as a leaf. She was really fluffy like a fluff ball. She was black, wite, and brown. She kind of looked like an ice cream sandwich with hot fudge on top. She let out a little skwek like she liked me. She smelled like a clean guinea pig. It was like they washed her in the washing machine. She felt like a soft blanket. At first we got her a small cage because she was tiny. We also got her food and bedding. I wanted to get her carrots and bell peppers because I did my research and guinea pigs like carrots and bell peppers. But we didn’t know what she liked. But then we got her a big cage that looked like a guinea pig paradis. She was scared at first. But she got used to are voies. Also one evening I was singing to her, and she started to go to sleep. It was so sweet. I love having a hopie guinea pig in my house now. It is so fun. But when I started going to my mom’s preshist started acting like she didn’t know me. She would hide for me but she wouldn't hide for my dad. I was wondering if she even was my guinea pig. She wouldn’t let me hold her; she was so shy to me. My dad said it would proudly take a couple months for her to not be scared of me. A couple months went by and nothing new was happening. I was really starting to think she wasn’t my guinea pig. I was really concerned because she was really shy to me but not my dad. So it was time for back to school and I didn’t want to leave my baby home. As school got closer I got sader and my heart pounded it was like you could see it through my chest. Then the time came school DUN DUN DUN. I mean I love school but I was very very sad. Also I had to leave my hot fudge ice cream sandwich fluff ball precious. I was very sad . I felt like I was melting into a bucket of gloominess. I thought my heart was staring inside me. I had tears running down my face. It was like I was crying a river. I loved her so much that I didn’t want to leave her. I thought she felt the same way as me. Inside I thought she would miss me too because I was her mom. I love her so much. I had only left her for my moms not school a whole seven horses. Then the next day there were tears in my eyes. My heart was pounding and I couldn’t hardly breathe because I was crying. My hands were shaking. I was walking slow and kind of humed over. Then a couple days passed. I started having butterflies in my stomach. My palms were sweating. Now my legs were shaking, not my hands. I was still gloomy. My fluff ball looked like she was smiling even though she can’t. Then a smile stretched across my face. My face lit up because my fluff all acted like she knew me. She all so smiled like the dog Winn Dixie. Now I was going to miss her when I went to school. But I wasn’t sad whomsoever now, because I knew my fluff ball loved me!
“ Crack Crack no Precious stop doing that!” Precious is my guinea pig. I have had her now for a while. I was 8 when I got her. I tried to beg my mom for a guinea pig. But she said “ no no no.” So then my dad said maybe I could have a guinea pig. Then I was like “yes yes.” Then we went to the pet store. The one I looked at was as tiny as a leaf. She was really fluffy like a fluff ball. She was black, wite, and brown. She kind of looked like an ice cream sandwich with hot fudge on top. She let out a little skwek like she liked me. She smelled like a clean guinea pig. It was like they washed her in the washing machine. She felt like a soft blanket. At first we got her a small cage because she was tiny. We also got her food and bedding. I wanted to get her carrots and bell peppers because I did my research and guinea pigs like carrots and bell peppers. But we didn’t know what she liked. But then we got her a big cage that looked like a guinea pig paradis. She was scared at first. But she got used to are voies. Also one evening I was singing to her, and she started to go to sleep. It was so sweet. I love having a hopie guinea pig in my house now. It is so fun. But when I started going to my mom’s preshist started acting like she didn’t know me. She would hide for me but she wouldn't hide for my dad. I was wondering if she even was my guinea pig. She wouldn’t let me hold her; she was so shy to me. My dad said it would proudly take a couple months for her to not be scared of me. A couple months went by and nothing new was happening. I was really starting to think she wasn’t my guinea pig. I was really concerned because she was really shy to me but not my dad. So it was time for back to school and I didn’t want to leave my baby home. As school got closer I got sader and my heart pounded it was like you could see it through my chest. Then the time came school DUN DUN DUN. I mean I love school but I was very very sad. Also I had to leave my hot fudge ice cream sandwich fluff ball precious. I was very sad . I felt like I was melting into a bucket of gloominess. I thought my heart was staring inside me. I had tears running down my face. It was like I was crying a river. I loved her so much that I didn’t want to leave her. I thought she felt the same way as me. Inside I thought she would miss me too because I was her mom. I love her so much. I had only left her for my moms not school a whole seven horses. Then the next day there were tears in my eyes. My heart was pounding and I couldn’t hardly breathe because I was crying. My hands were shaking. I was walking slow and kind of humed over. Then a couple days passed. I started having butterflies in my stomach. My palms were sweating. Now my legs were shaking, not my hands. I was still gloomy. My fluff ball looked like she was smiling even though she can’t. Then a smile stretched across my face. My face lit up because my fluff all acted like she knew me. She all so smiled like the dog Winn Dixie. Now I was going to miss her when I went to school. But I wasn’t sad whomsoever now, because I knew my fluff ball loved me!
Eli
The Story of Lily and Scout
One late night at 216 Forest Lane I was sitting on my couch and it seemed like they would never get here! I couldn’t wait any longer, but I had to. Sooner or later my daddy and neighbor pulled up in the driveway. I raced out the door running as fast as I could, and opened the truck to see two milk chocolate puppies in a small black cage. They were wagging their nubby little tails, yipping and winning. So I unhooked the latch to see two tiny brown creatures rolling around in my backyard like tumbleweeds. The minute I laid my eyes on them I fell in love. We were all very tired so we put them in their pen for some shut eye. My brother and I walked inside to get ready for bed ourselves. We slept wonderfully that night and dreamed of puppies bouncing around on our beds. We were wide awake first thing in the morning and We ran outside together and called the adorable companions but nothing. I called again zilch. Then, Luke says, “Look over there!” I started back and saw Lily Belle peek out of the trees. I came closer to her, and picked her up then started to play with her some. Scout on the other hand was romping in the backyard around like it was kibble heaven! Of course Lily had to lick me on the nose but now I had two thoughts bouncing around in my head like ping pong balls. 1. Why did they have different personalities? 2. How did they get out? I scratched my head and looked around their pen. I looked for any signs that would tell us how they got out. We looked for holes, dents and gaps. Then BINGO! I found a small gap where the wire separates the pen and the door. I put Lily beside the gap then Scout. I noted that they were both small enough to fit through the gap. We told our parents and they thought that if we put a small log in front of the gap it would prevent them from slipping out again. It turns out that was the perfect solution because the little furballs were snug and sound in their homemade dog house the next morning. I knew we would have an awesome future together when Scout stretched two front legs and yawned.
The Story of Lily and Scout
One late night at 216 Forest Lane I was sitting on my couch and it seemed like they would never get here! I couldn’t wait any longer, but I had to. Sooner or later my daddy and neighbor pulled up in the driveway. I raced out the door running as fast as I could, and opened the truck to see two milk chocolate puppies in a small black cage. They were wagging their nubby little tails, yipping and winning. So I unhooked the latch to see two tiny brown creatures rolling around in my backyard like tumbleweeds. The minute I laid my eyes on them I fell in love. We were all very tired so we put them in their pen for some shut eye. My brother and I walked inside to get ready for bed ourselves. We slept wonderfully that night and dreamed of puppies bouncing around on our beds. We were wide awake first thing in the morning and We ran outside together and called the adorable companions but nothing. I called again zilch. Then, Luke says, “Look over there!” I started back and saw Lily Belle peek out of the trees. I came closer to her, and picked her up then started to play with her some. Scout on the other hand was romping in the backyard around like it was kibble heaven! Of course Lily had to lick me on the nose but now I had two thoughts bouncing around in my head like ping pong balls. 1. Why did they have different personalities? 2. How did they get out? I scratched my head and looked around their pen. I looked for any signs that would tell us how they got out. We looked for holes, dents and gaps. Then BINGO! I found a small gap where the wire separates the pen and the door. I put Lily beside the gap then Scout. I noted that they were both small enough to fit through the gap. We told our parents and they thought that if we put a small log in front of the gap it would prevent them from slipping out again. It turns out that was the perfect solution because the little furballs were snug and sound in their homemade dog house the next morning. I knew we would have an awesome future together when Scout stretched two front legs and yawned.
Getting Peggy
Riley
One brilliant day, I went to school and came back with a spiky hedgehog. Ring, as I get out early. I got my bookbag and headed to the office. My dad was there. I wondered why. Once I got in the car, I was dead silent. “W-w-where are we going?” I said in a frightful voice. He didn’t answer. I thought we would go home but we were heading towards Anderson. I was shaking. I don't live in Anderson! Then, we got to a dark mysterious house. My dad said, “Get out of the car.” I got out. Next, I went inside. There was a woman at the door. She was holding a spiky, round animal that was small. It had small little cute round ears. The prickly pal also had a little nub tail. She was a shy baby hedgehog. My eyes lit up. I cheered! She was so cute! I asked what its name was. She said, “Her name is Peggy Darputo.” “Such a cool name!” I exclaimed. She took me to her cage. She had a little fence with a wheel and a pan with litter. There was a water bottle that had a little ball in the end so, when she pushes the tiny ball up with her tongue she gets water. It had a blue food bowl with a Christmas blanket. “Why don't you hold her,” she said in a delightful voice. I held her. I loved her cute little mushy face. Then, she took me to the bathroom to cut her nails and give her a bath. I gave her a bath in the sink with body wash. She didn't really enjoy it. I held her some more and let her peer around on the wooden floor. I was about to go. “Would you like to keep her?” she said. “Really!” I replied in a cheerful voice. “Yes!” she said. A smile lit across my face. I felt like I was going to burst. We got her cage and supplies. She had some food, body wash, litter, a wheel, blankets, and much more. All of the supplies were in a brown cardboard box. In the car she sat in a small red basket that had snowmen on it. I pet her the whole ride home. When I got home, I set her cage up and held her till I had to go to bed. To this day, I still have her and I love her so much.
Riley
One brilliant day, I went to school and came back with a spiky hedgehog. Ring, as I get out early. I got my bookbag and headed to the office. My dad was there. I wondered why. Once I got in the car, I was dead silent. “W-w-where are we going?” I said in a frightful voice. He didn’t answer. I thought we would go home but we were heading towards Anderson. I was shaking. I don't live in Anderson! Then, we got to a dark mysterious house. My dad said, “Get out of the car.” I got out. Next, I went inside. There was a woman at the door. She was holding a spiky, round animal that was small. It had small little cute round ears. The prickly pal also had a little nub tail. She was a shy baby hedgehog. My eyes lit up. I cheered! She was so cute! I asked what its name was. She said, “Her name is Peggy Darputo.” “Such a cool name!” I exclaimed. She took me to her cage. She had a little fence with a wheel and a pan with litter. There was a water bottle that had a little ball in the end so, when she pushes the tiny ball up with her tongue she gets water. It had a blue food bowl with a Christmas blanket. “Why don't you hold her,” she said in a delightful voice. I held her. I loved her cute little mushy face. Then, she took me to the bathroom to cut her nails and give her a bath. I gave her a bath in the sink with body wash. She didn't really enjoy it. I held her some more and let her peer around on the wooden floor. I was about to go. “Would you like to keep her?” she said. “Really!” I replied in a cheerful voice. “Yes!” she said. A smile lit across my face. I felt like I was going to burst. We got her cage and supplies. She had some food, body wash, litter, a wheel, blankets, and much more. All of the supplies were in a brown cardboard box. In the car she sat in a small red basket that had snowmen on it. I pet her the whole ride home. When I got home, I set her cage up and held her till I had to go to bed. To this day, I still have her and I love her so much.
The Killer Wolf
By. Reagan
“Wolves we are running out of food,” said Reagan. “But there is a killer wolf out there,” said wolf. “Fine I will go since i’m the ultumere wolf.” said Reagan “And this is how the avenger begins but wait let me tell you a little about the character she is very courageous and she is on a hazardous mission she has wiat and brown hair and she is so nice this is why she helps all of the werewolves let go back to the story,” said the narrotor. So she went across the aqua. Then she called the wolves but not with a phone with a howl. “So she said where in the world is the food,” said Reagan “It’s like 5 minutes from you WHAT!,” said wolf It was 7:30 and it was growing night and I hered a howl “It sounds strange plus it’s not even a full moon,”. Then I heard footsteps who’s there? At last I heard a wolf say hello little wolf and then ...right in front of my face was the one and only killer wolf “now your mine,” said the bad wolf I was like um ain’t yours so I bit him and I kicked him so it would be fare but way did he call me a feisty one? he is then as fast as a cheetah he graded me out of thin air then an idea popped into my head so I said “hay someone is stealing your food,” he dropped me super mean but at least he let me go then I saw him running to me. I jumped up I fastly opened my mouth he fell straight into it I laffed then I just slung him over my head it was fun so I did it for an hour then I let him go I sent him flying opps. When I got to the den “I got the food,” said Reagan then I felt something burn I fell to the ground in pain what was going to happen then I realized that a hunter sout me there is a hunter out here ohno why is life so bad but sooner I hilled then I herd a gun shot my mouth opened I stared pacing back and forth when my moth opened it felt like an animal was clawing my hart out I sprinted to the sound as soon as I sine it I dropped it.
By. Reagan
“Wolves we are running out of food,” said Reagan. “But there is a killer wolf out there,” said wolf. “Fine I will go since i’m the ultumere wolf.” said Reagan “And this is how the avenger begins but wait let me tell you a little about the character she is very courageous and she is on a hazardous mission she has wiat and brown hair and she is so nice this is why she helps all of the werewolves let go back to the story,” said the narrotor. So she went across the aqua. Then she called the wolves but not with a phone with a howl. “So she said where in the world is the food,” said Reagan “It’s like 5 minutes from you WHAT!,” said wolf It was 7:30 and it was growing night and I hered a howl “It sounds strange plus it’s not even a full moon,”. Then I heard footsteps who’s there? At last I heard a wolf say hello little wolf and then ...right in front of my face was the one and only killer wolf “now your mine,” said the bad wolf I was like um ain’t yours so I bit him and I kicked him so it would be fare but way did he call me a feisty one? he is then as fast as a cheetah he graded me out of thin air then an idea popped into my head so I said “hay someone is stealing your food,” he dropped me super mean but at least he let me go then I saw him running to me. I jumped up I fastly opened my mouth he fell straight into it I laffed then I just slung him over my head it was fun so I did it for an hour then I let him go I sent him flying opps. When I got to the den “I got the food,” said Reagan then I felt something burn I fell to the ground in pain what was going to happen then I realized that a hunter sout me there is a hunter out here ohno why is life so bad but sooner I hilled then I herd a gun shot my mouth opened I stared pacing back and forth when my moth opened it felt like an animal was clawing my hart out I sprinted to the sound as soon as I sine it I dropped it.
The Great Hedgehog Hunt
Gavin
“Spine Shock, time to eat!” exclaimed Daniel. “Huh guess he’s not here” he said while placing down Spine’s food bowl on his desk. Which consisted of 16 grains of rice, gravy, small pieces of shredded chicken and tiny bits of iceberg lettuce. He called to his sister Bridgette, “Hey Bridge, have you seen my hedgehog? I can’t seem to find him.” “No I haven’t and STOP CALLING ME BRIDGE!!!!!!” she hollered.
Spine is an adorable spike ball that Daniel and his parents drove all the way to Tennessee to pick him up. He’s a tiny hedgehog with a back so brown it was as if tree bark and dark chocolate were mixed together. As soon as he placed Spine onto his lap he fell into a deep slumber, and when that happened Daniel knew that they were going to be in a way like father and son. Spine has gorgeous eyes both oh so bright one is sky blue and the other one is bright hazel.
Suddenly, a crash that sounded like the earth cracking into two halves happened right outside their house. “What was that!?” they both shouted. Daniel said, “It sounded like it came from the Pinwood forest.” They both bolted out of the door into the forest passing the treehouse that they built 10 years ago when they were 6 years old and by now the tree has grasped it into the moss and the leaves. “Hey Bridge, check this out” she came over and saw what looked like a remote or a speaker part of an old house phone. It had the words in all caps and in bold print ANIMAL TRACKER when she saw it she had a brilliant idea. She said with confidence, “Dan, take the tracker and follow me to the treehouse!” He agreed. About 5 minutes later they had both arrived at the treehouse. Daniel asked Bridge, “Why did you want me to bring the tracker here?” she replied, “The reason is the Tv projector and the binoculars in here.” She pulled some wires out from the back of the TV projector and plugged it into the device. It projected a map of the forest. They clicked a button on the tracker to start tracing hedgehog DNA in the forest. When Daniel saw two traces in the most recent time he asked Bridge, “Could one of these traces be Spine’s?” she answered, “There is a possibility so I would assume that it is him.” They both grabbed the binoculars and unplugged the tracker and leaped out of the tree house. Once the both of them got about 5 feet away from the trace it disappeared. Bridge said very confused, “Why did the trace vanish!?” Daniel shrugged and said ,“I have no idea.” Suddenly, the tracker started to work again and the trace showed back up and they went on to look at the trace. 10 minutes later the trace split into 2 parts and just in the knick of time a button on the tracker popped out its little red head that just like the name of the device in both capitals and in bold the word SPLIT Daniel clicked the button and the tracker just as the button advised split into 2 trackers they both split into different directions. Heading to the Northeast Daniel had hopped over a river and is getting into the most dense part of the forest where there are some Birch and Spruce trees and some wild crowberries. In the Northwest, Bridge is running insanely fast one minute she is running in an Oak wood forest and the next it all goes black. When she awoke everything was illuminating, her eyes darted all around, faireys flew around her what looked like cotton candy dogs ran around sniffing her. Then two mysterious beings walked up to her “What do you think you are doing here mortel?!” demanded the first guard. Bridge said back “I---I don’t know I was just running in the forest and I woke up here.” The second calmer and politer guard said “Ok I will let you go with just a warning but next time you want to come here you have to talk with the mayor because he doesn’t really like humans that much.” She thanked the polite guard and started to head to the gate. Then she got a call from Dan he said excitedly “I found Spine i’m sending you my coordinates!” She got there in no less than a minute since it was 5 feet away from the gate and they picked up Spine and headed home.
2 years have passed since Daneil and Bridge found Spine in the Pinwood forest after he ran away Daniel thought of something and went to tell Bridge “Do you remember when you were in Magicant and how there were a lot of hedgehogs just roaming around?” She said while electronically turning the “page” of her Kindle “Yeah I do, so why are you asking?” He said “Well I think Spine would like it better in the wild than in a cage, so I just thought that we should bring him to Magicant.” She turned off her Kindle and agreed to go. It took them 2 and a half hours to reach Magicant. Along the way Bridge had contacted the mayor of Magicant and he allowed them to enter so the procedure was a success. They said their goodbyes to Spine and it was very emotional.
Gavin
“Spine Shock, time to eat!” exclaimed Daniel. “Huh guess he’s not here” he said while placing down Spine’s food bowl on his desk. Which consisted of 16 grains of rice, gravy, small pieces of shredded chicken and tiny bits of iceberg lettuce. He called to his sister Bridgette, “Hey Bridge, have you seen my hedgehog? I can’t seem to find him.” “No I haven’t and STOP CALLING ME BRIDGE!!!!!!” she hollered.
Spine is an adorable spike ball that Daniel and his parents drove all the way to Tennessee to pick him up. He’s a tiny hedgehog with a back so brown it was as if tree bark and dark chocolate were mixed together. As soon as he placed Spine onto his lap he fell into a deep slumber, and when that happened Daniel knew that they were going to be in a way like father and son. Spine has gorgeous eyes both oh so bright one is sky blue and the other one is bright hazel.
Suddenly, a crash that sounded like the earth cracking into two halves happened right outside their house. “What was that!?” they both shouted. Daniel said, “It sounded like it came from the Pinwood forest.” They both bolted out of the door into the forest passing the treehouse that they built 10 years ago when they were 6 years old and by now the tree has grasped it into the moss and the leaves. “Hey Bridge, check this out” she came over and saw what looked like a remote or a speaker part of an old house phone. It had the words in all caps and in bold print ANIMAL TRACKER when she saw it she had a brilliant idea. She said with confidence, “Dan, take the tracker and follow me to the treehouse!” He agreed. About 5 minutes later they had both arrived at the treehouse. Daniel asked Bridge, “Why did you want me to bring the tracker here?” she replied, “The reason is the Tv projector and the binoculars in here.” She pulled some wires out from the back of the TV projector and plugged it into the device. It projected a map of the forest. They clicked a button on the tracker to start tracing hedgehog DNA in the forest. When Daniel saw two traces in the most recent time he asked Bridge, “Could one of these traces be Spine’s?” she answered, “There is a possibility so I would assume that it is him.” They both grabbed the binoculars and unplugged the tracker and leaped out of the tree house. Once the both of them got about 5 feet away from the trace it disappeared. Bridge said very confused, “Why did the trace vanish!?” Daniel shrugged and said ,“I have no idea.” Suddenly, the tracker started to work again and the trace showed back up and they went on to look at the trace. 10 minutes later the trace split into 2 parts and just in the knick of time a button on the tracker popped out its little red head that just like the name of the device in both capitals and in bold the word SPLIT Daniel clicked the button and the tracker just as the button advised split into 2 trackers they both split into different directions. Heading to the Northeast Daniel had hopped over a river and is getting into the most dense part of the forest where there are some Birch and Spruce trees and some wild crowberries. In the Northwest, Bridge is running insanely fast one minute she is running in an Oak wood forest and the next it all goes black. When she awoke everything was illuminating, her eyes darted all around, faireys flew around her what looked like cotton candy dogs ran around sniffing her. Then two mysterious beings walked up to her “What do you think you are doing here mortel?!” demanded the first guard. Bridge said back “I---I don’t know I was just running in the forest and I woke up here.” The second calmer and politer guard said “Ok I will let you go with just a warning but next time you want to come here you have to talk with the mayor because he doesn’t really like humans that much.” She thanked the polite guard and started to head to the gate. Then she got a call from Dan he said excitedly “I found Spine i’m sending you my coordinates!” She got there in no less than a minute since it was 5 feet away from the gate and they picked up Spine and headed home.
2 years have passed since Daneil and Bridge found Spine in the Pinwood forest after he ran away Daniel thought of something and went to tell Bridge “Do you remember when you were in Magicant and how there were a lot of hedgehogs just roaming around?” She said while electronically turning the “page” of her Kindle “Yeah I do, so why are you asking?” He said “Well I think Spine would like it better in the wild than in a cage, so I just thought that we should bring him to Magicant.” She turned off her Kindle and agreed to go. It took them 2 and a half hours to reach Magicant. Along the way Bridge had contacted the mayor of Magicant and he allowed them to enter so the procedure was a success. They said their goodbyes to Spine and it was very emotional.
By: Braxton
Grand Grandma
‘’Brax!, Brax!!!’’, My neighbor hollered in shock.’’I found these three kittens on the side of the road! Can you keep them?’’, he asked in hope. ‘’Can I?’’, I questioned my Dad. ‘’Yes, but only one”, he replied. My eyes lit up like the sun. My heart was racing like it was in a marathon. The tiny thing looked like a fluffy fur ball, with beautiful blue eyes. She was black as a bat, and started meowing and nibbling on my finger. As soon as we laid eyes on each other we knew we were meant to be. “I think we should call her Luna”, I said happily. So here we are 1 month later and Luna has grown a lot over the weeks. My Mom said we HAD to keep her outside. Though It's just from all the meowing and raket we have to deal with. I don't blame her but it's best for me to go to bed, it's almost 9:15. So I put her outside and everything was smooth, until… I woke up at 11:00!!! I didn’t know why either. At first I thought it was Luna but I decided to check it out anyway. On my adventure to the door I heard scratch, scratch, meow, and someone was bolting across the porch like a beast as I hastened to see what had happened. I squinted my eyes and glanced over to the porch. Sure enough there was a brown blanket sticking out of the cat bed with a yellow ball dashing across the floor. The kitty was gone. My heart was pounding as I asked myself “did you hear that?” After my slumber I alerted my Dad as quick as I could. “Well Braxton”, he said. “We can go look for her but there's not much chance we can find her.” There were tears running down my face as I trudged to the den to watch football. About 1 hour later we received a knock, knock from the door. My mind was so set on Luna that I didn't even hear it. But suddenly “Hey Baby!”, a voice came from the door. “GRAMMA!”, I squealed. She had a grey cotton ball sitting in her palms. “You found Luna?”, I asked desperately. “Yes, your Papa got the kitty because it looked starved. Sorry if I startled you.”, she replied. My heart was beating as fast as boxing gloves. My cheeks brightened up red like a cherry, and there were 7 blue drips riding down my face. I promised myself never to lose the kitty again as I thought of what could've happened. Grandma has saved the day.
Grand Grandma
‘’Brax!, Brax!!!’’, My neighbor hollered in shock.’’I found these three kittens on the side of the road! Can you keep them?’’, he asked in hope. ‘’Can I?’’, I questioned my Dad. ‘’Yes, but only one”, he replied. My eyes lit up like the sun. My heart was racing like it was in a marathon. The tiny thing looked like a fluffy fur ball, with beautiful blue eyes. She was black as a bat, and started meowing and nibbling on my finger. As soon as we laid eyes on each other we knew we were meant to be. “I think we should call her Luna”, I said happily. So here we are 1 month later and Luna has grown a lot over the weeks. My Mom said we HAD to keep her outside. Though It's just from all the meowing and raket we have to deal with. I don't blame her but it's best for me to go to bed, it's almost 9:15. So I put her outside and everything was smooth, until… I woke up at 11:00!!! I didn’t know why either. At first I thought it was Luna but I decided to check it out anyway. On my adventure to the door I heard scratch, scratch, meow, and someone was bolting across the porch like a beast as I hastened to see what had happened. I squinted my eyes and glanced over to the porch. Sure enough there was a brown blanket sticking out of the cat bed with a yellow ball dashing across the floor. The kitty was gone. My heart was pounding as I asked myself “did you hear that?” After my slumber I alerted my Dad as quick as I could. “Well Braxton”, he said. “We can go look for her but there's not much chance we can find her.” There were tears running down my face as I trudged to the den to watch football. About 1 hour later we received a knock, knock from the door. My mind was so set on Luna that I didn't even hear it. But suddenly “Hey Baby!”, a voice came from the door. “GRAMMA!”, I squealed. She had a grey cotton ball sitting in her palms. “You found Luna?”, I asked desperately. “Yes, your Papa got the kitty because it looked starved. Sorry if I startled you.”, she replied. My heart was beating as fast as boxing gloves. My cheeks brightened up red like a cherry, and there were 7 blue drips riding down my face. I promised myself never to lose the kitty again as I thought of what could've happened. Grandma has saved the day.
My lost dog
Judson
“Honey!” I yelled. Nothing. ”Honey!” I yelled again. Where is she I thought as I scavenged the backyard.” She will be ok. She knew the way back. ``Honey is a slick white pointer mix with black polka dots and fur as white as snow .Also she has a tail as soft as a cloud. And adorable floppy ears. Last she adores to sprint with me on the nice green cut grass. Also on occasions she will come into my room with a wagging tail and she will jump up on my bed and snuggle up into me. She never showed up at the house though so everyone started searching. We had looked everywhere but she was nowhere to be seen. Just then I saw a slight movement in the shadows. Then the leaves started russleing “what is that I thought.”Just then a tiny white tale poke out from behind the big bark tree. That’s when I knew my shaggy stranger was back. She started sprinting toward me. She jumped up and started the slobbery tongue licking. My heart sank. I felt like I had just won a grand prize. I had a smile ear to ear even Honey had a smile slobbery but still a smile. I started running around the forest and of course Honey started running with me. I scampered back home filled with joy. When I got home I told everyone the good news. Everyone was happy, but I was the happiest. That night I decided to never leave her side again, and I hope everyone agrees.
Judson
“Honey!” I yelled. Nothing. ”Honey!” I yelled again. Where is she I thought as I scavenged the backyard.” She will be ok. She knew the way back. ``Honey is a slick white pointer mix with black polka dots and fur as white as snow .Also she has a tail as soft as a cloud. And adorable floppy ears. Last she adores to sprint with me on the nice green cut grass. Also on occasions she will come into my room with a wagging tail and she will jump up on my bed and snuggle up into me. She never showed up at the house though so everyone started searching. We had looked everywhere but she was nowhere to be seen. Just then I saw a slight movement in the shadows. Then the leaves started russleing “what is that I thought.”Just then a tiny white tale poke out from behind the big bark tree. That’s when I knew my shaggy stranger was back. She started sprinting toward me. She jumped up and started the slobbery tongue licking. My heart sank. I felt like I had just won a grand prize. I had a smile ear to ear even Honey had a smile slobbery but still a smile. I started running around the forest and of course Honey started running with me. I scampered back home filled with joy. When I got home I told everyone the good news. Everyone was happy, but I was the happiest. That night I decided to never leave her side again, and I hope everyone agrees.
Colton
The Statue and the Monkey
Do you like stories about Monkeys well here's one for you he goes on an adventure all right. “One day in New York I woke up on a jolly morning,'' I said. I got a exotic pet and it lives in the jungle. “I got a Monkey,''! I said .“I named him,” Banana man, the fluffy fur ball that he is, he's pretty cute and adorable and he's sometimes annoying and crazy because I don't know anyone who climbs the Christmas tree,” I mumbled . My mom said,” don't make fun of your Monkey,” she said We went to the Statue of liberty every week on a boat. We brought Banana man .I look away for one second and he's not holding my hand. I was in shock. I was kinda mad. Someone said look at that Monkey I sall him climbing the STATUE OF LIBERTY! I looked up at my mom with my mouth wide open I could fit a burger in it. He was at the top, everybody was looking and we called 911. We said get a helicopter and go to the statue .They showed up but charged us 50 $ but we paid . But he said no monkeys aloud. The Banana man was raging because somebody threw a banana at the Statue. I was still in so much shock . We decided to never bring Banana man again. I will never forget how crazy he is . THE END
The Statue and the Monkey
Do you like stories about Monkeys well here's one for you he goes on an adventure all right. “One day in New York I woke up on a jolly morning,'' I said. I got a exotic pet and it lives in the jungle. “I got a Monkey,''! I said .“I named him,” Banana man, the fluffy fur ball that he is, he's pretty cute and adorable and he's sometimes annoying and crazy because I don't know anyone who climbs the Christmas tree,” I mumbled . My mom said,” don't make fun of your Monkey,” she said We went to the Statue of liberty every week on a boat. We brought Banana man .I look away for one second and he's not holding my hand. I was in shock. I was kinda mad. Someone said look at that Monkey I sall him climbing the STATUE OF LIBERTY! I looked up at my mom with my mouth wide open I could fit a burger in it. He was at the top, everybody was looking and we called 911. We said get a helicopter and go to the statue .They showed up but charged us 50 $ but we paid . But he said no monkeys aloud. The Banana man was raging because somebody threw a banana at the Statue. I was still in so much shock . We decided to never bring Banana man again. I will never forget how crazy he is . THE END
Alana Charlie gets Lost
“Charlie, come here girl, here Charles!” I was screaming as loud as possible. She went on the other side of the property, and would NOT come back! SLAM! I shut the door and ran to Charlie’s pen full of energy! She was sitting at the gate waiting for me. Her black coat that was black as night was gleaming in the mid-morning sun, her big twinkly brown eyes were a piece of chocolate staring up at me saying, “Please let me out!” Click! I opened the lock. Charlie started prancing around happily like a wild pony. I ran to the woods, and Charlie bolted up ahead of me like a sprinter running the last inch of their race! I hopped on the swing that my dad had made me. I started swinging for a few minutes.That's when I realized Charlie had vanished! I was screaming at the top of my lungs, “Charlie, Charlie, here Charles!” I waited. Nothing. Then suddenly I heard something down at the creek. At first it sounded like a small stone hitting the water. I ignored it. Then I heard it again, this time loud like a roaring waterfall, and that's when I heard the barking. barking. That's all I needed. I climbed over the long log dogging the barbed wire and there was Charlie, pouncing at the crawfish in the creek! “Charlie!” I yelled one more time. She looked at me and kept playing. My face turned red and I gritted my teeth. I stomped down to the creek, I saw something run the other direction, but of course I ignored it. I mean, it could be tons of things, like a squirrel! But whatever it was Charlie wanted it so she ran, and I ran after her. After a few minutes of chasing, I snached up Charles! “Bad girl!” I said glaring, like a hawk watching her prey. Charlie whimpered and made her puppy face, “How can I stay mad at you?” I asked her. After a minute or two, I decided to find out what Charlie wanted, besides the crawfish,(it had better be worth messing up my new shoes) I looked around and you’ll never believe who I saw up a towering oak, my furry feline, my close companion, my purring pet, my crazy cat Elvira! She must have been out in the woods,and when Charlie caught the scent of her, Elvira ran up the tree! She was the one I saw that Charlie wanted! “Laina!”, Max, my twelve year old brother said, breaking the silence, “Time for supper!” I smiled, “Come on Charles let go home.” I said, my face gleaming. I was really disappointed when Charlie got lost. I will never in a 1,000 years bring Charlie back into the woods without a leash. I’ll never let it happen again.
“Charlie, come here girl, here Charles!” I was screaming as loud as possible. She went on the other side of the property, and would NOT come back! SLAM! I shut the door and ran to Charlie’s pen full of energy! She was sitting at the gate waiting for me. Her black coat that was black as night was gleaming in the mid-morning sun, her big twinkly brown eyes were a piece of chocolate staring up at me saying, “Please let me out!” Click! I opened the lock. Charlie started prancing around happily like a wild pony. I ran to the woods, and Charlie bolted up ahead of me like a sprinter running the last inch of their race! I hopped on the swing that my dad had made me. I started swinging for a few minutes.That's when I realized Charlie had vanished! I was screaming at the top of my lungs, “Charlie, Charlie, here Charles!” I waited. Nothing. Then suddenly I heard something down at the creek. At first it sounded like a small stone hitting the water. I ignored it. Then I heard it again, this time loud like a roaring waterfall, and that's when I heard the barking. barking. That's all I needed. I climbed over the long log dogging the barbed wire and there was Charlie, pouncing at the crawfish in the creek! “Charlie!” I yelled one more time. She looked at me and kept playing. My face turned red and I gritted my teeth. I stomped down to the creek, I saw something run the other direction, but of course I ignored it. I mean, it could be tons of things, like a squirrel! But whatever it was Charlie wanted it so she ran, and I ran after her. After a few minutes of chasing, I snached up Charles! “Bad girl!” I said glaring, like a hawk watching her prey. Charlie whimpered and made her puppy face, “How can I stay mad at you?” I asked her. After a minute or two, I decided to find out what Charlie wanted, besides the crawfish,(it had better be worth messing up my new shoes) I looked around and you’ll never believe who I saw up a towering oak, my furry feline, my close companion, my purring pet, my crazy cat Elvira! She must have been out in the woods,and when Charlie caught the scent of her, Elvira ran up the tree! She was the one I saw that Charlie wanted! “Laina!”, Max, my twelve year old brother said, breaking the silence, “Time for supper!” I smiled, “Come on Charles let go home.” I said, my face gleaming. I was really disappointed when Charlie got lost. I will never in a 1,000 years bring Charlie back into the woods without a leash. I’ll never let it happen again.
Caroline
The Magical Puppy
I was a brave explorer who found treasure at sea and i've got a message from some scientists. They said I could help them search for a new dog in the Amazon rainforest.They also said the dog was brown and it’s fur was as soft as cotton candy. The dogs paws was half the size of a dollar bill. They said it’s fur was brown. It’s tail was small tall as two globes stack on top of each other. It’s tail was small and it’s eyes and horn was rainbow. I was heading on my search! When I was on my private plane I saw scientists with their boss Xen. They were looking for a magical elephant. Finally I arrived. The scientists told me more about the dog. It was migal! They showed me the O snake witch means Olivia snak. I was going to go on my search but before I could go on my search the scientists teamed me up with Olivia who was named after the O snake. I'm glad to have a partner. She had two creature power suits! We went on and on and it was two days. Then we heard a small whimper then a bush, we seen a paw no two no three now four, then a horn! We found the dog! We wanted to yell! Our eyes were as big as dog bowls.We were grinning from ear to ear. Our arms were up and high fiving each other! I felt like a earthquake happened in side of me! We took the dog back to camp. The scientists were so happy, but not who me and Olivia thought.
Dog talks chapter 2
When I woke up from my nap I heard yall will never stop us now. The girls who found me are being used as fashion models! They were being fashion models for villains! The real scientists was tied up to a tree. “Let’s go with these girls, scientists and the migal dog” said one of the villains. Pow, pow the villains boss said “ let me get the dog”. Oh no now their coming to put me in a cage! Olivia called her pet snake , the O snake. The snake freed the girls, then they were putting on the creator power suits. Caroline turned into a scarlet mack, and Olivia turned into the O snake. Caroline graped the cage I was in, and flyed on. She made sure I was okay. The villains tried to fight back! Pow,pow the leader tried to suot to make Caroline unstable, but it did not make her. Olivia freed the scientists and casted away the villains. Everything was quiet. They won! They freed me and called me coril. I will always be a little explorer with Caroline and make her true colors shine thought. I will also make her feel like cookies, but that was just the begging of a beautiful friendship.
The Magical Puppy
I was a brave explorer who found treasure at sea and i've got a message from some scientists. They said I could help them search for a new dog in the Amazon rainforest.They also said the dog was brown and it’s fur was as soft as cotton candy. The dogs paws was half the size of a dollar bill. They said it’s fur was brown. It’s tail was small tall as two globes stack on top of each other. It’s tail was small and it’s eyes and horn was rainbow. I was heading on my search! When I was on my private plane I saw scientists with their boss Xen. They were looking for a magical elephant. Finally I arrived. The scientists told me more about the dog. It was migal! They showed me the O snake witch means Olivia snak. I was going to go on my search but before I could go on my search the scientists teamed me up with Olivia who was named after the O snake. I'm glad to have a partner. She had two creature power suits! We went on and on and it was two days. Then we heard a small whimper then a bush, we seen a paw no two no three now four, then a horn! We found the dog! We wanted to yell! Our eyes were as big as dog bowls.We were grinning from ear to ear. Our arms were up and high fiving each other! I felt like a earthquake happened in side of me! We took the dog back to camp. The scientists were so happy, but not who me and Olivia thought.
Dog talks chapter 2
When I woke up from my nap I heard yall will never stop us now. The girls who found me are being used as fashion models! They were being fashion models for villains! The real scientists was tied up to a tree. “Let’s go with these girls, scientists and the migal dog” said one of the villains. Pow, pow the villains boss said “ let me get the dog”. Oh no now their coming to put me in a cage! Olivia called her pet snake , the O snake. The snake freed the girls, then they were putting on the creator power suits. Caroline turned into a scarlet mack, and Olivia turned into the O snake. Caroline graped the cage I was in, and flyed on. She made sure I was okay. The villains tried to fight back! Pow,pow the leader tried to suot to make Caroline unstable, but it did not make her. Olivia freed the scientists and casted away the villains. Everything was quiet. They won! They freed me and called me coril. I will always be a little explorer with Caroline and make her true colors shine thought. I will also make her feel like cookies, but that was just the begging of a beautiful friendship.
Mission Snake Slither
BYLivvy
This scaly stricker was green and black. He would strike if he liked you. He had glowing glittering wings , adored dancing ,and making friends. He lived in the damp wet rainforets and I guess he liked to swim. He was wet. I emetaly loved him. He also lived in a rock. You had to use a wand to free him. But the serpent was sad. He wanted an owner. Lucky for him lurking close by was a girl named Livvy. Her faithful companion Checka came alone too. Unlucky for him a few villains were close also. Mr.Bananas was green and yellow to blend in with the jungle and he had shiny sparkle sporty wings. Me and my banana thief started our wild search. On the way we found Caroline helping a hurt dolphin. Caroline said she would help us. For some weird reason six animals were following us. When we got to crystal falls we got the wand. We found a map with the wand. We followed the map to the lovable friend. But then the beasts were gone. When we turned around something happened. ¨HEY LET US Go GIVE US THE WAND,¨we shouted.¨never we will use the snake to be rich.¨ ,the villains said. Oh no we have been captured and put in a cage. Those animals were a trick. They were the villains. A tear fell from my face as I watched my friend start to sheed. When he was done the villains used the wand to get him out of the rock. Another tear fell for my face. I couldn't look away as the villains started to laugh. It was hard to watch as more tears fell from my face.¨But remember you have a homing device on your creachters power suits. We can use them to stop the villains¨ Caroline said.¨ Ok¨ I said. Beep, beep, beep, zoom, zoom , zoom . Then we activated snake and mackal powers. Then we teamed up with the snake and stopped the villains. The snake was saved. And for the villains well they were on an ice flow in the middle of nowhere. ¨Yay we did it¨ we shouted. ¨ Thanks for helping me on my search Caroline¨I said. No problem but you have to help me on one of my journeys ¨ Caroline said. ¨Ok ok I will¨ I said. Then the sietest called Caroline. ¨I got go”She said. ¨Ok I'll drop you off¨. I said. Me and Caroline fell home on my new best friend. ¨I wonder what the scientist want¨ Caroline said. After that Caroline had a search of her own.It was fun finding my new best friend. I hope the villains don't come back when Caroline is on her search .
BYLivvy
This scaly stricker was green and black. He would strike if he liked you. He had glowing glittering wings , adored dancing ,and making friends. He lived in the damp wet rainforets and I guess he liked to swim. He was wet. I emetaly loved him. He also lived in a rock. You had to use a wand to free him. But the serpent was sad. He wanted an owner. Lucky for him lurking close by was a girl named Livvy. Her faithful companion Checka came alone too. Unlucky for him a few villains were close also. Mr.Bananas was green and yellow to blend in with the jungle and he had shiny sparkle sporty wings. Me and my banana thief started our wild search. On the way we found Caroline helping a hurt dolphin. Caroline said she would help us. For some weird reason six animals were following us. When we got to crystal falls we got the wand. We found a map with the wand. We followed the map to the lovable friend. But then the beasts were gone. When we turned around something happened. ¨HEY LET US Go GIVE US THE WAND,¨we shouted.¨never we will use the snake to be rich.¨ ,the villains said. Oh no we have been captured and put in a cage. Those animals were a trick. They were the villains. A tear fell from my face as I watched my friend start to sheed. When he was done the villains used the wand to get him out of the rock. Another tear fell for my face. I couldn't look away as the villains started to laugh. It was hard to watch as more tears fell from my face.¨But remember you have a homing device on your creachters power suits. We can use them to stop the villains¨ Caroline said.¨ Ok¨ I said. Beep, beep, beep, zoom, zoom , zoom . Then we activated snake and mackal powers. Then we teamed up with the snake and stopped the villains. The snake was saved. And for the villains well they were on an ice flow in the middle of nowhere. ¨Yay we did it¨ we shouted. ¨ Thanks for helping me on my search Caroline¨I said. No problem but you have to help me on one of my journeys ¨ Caroline said. ¨Ok ok I will¨ I said. Then the sietest called Caroline. ¨I got go”She said. ¨Ok I'll drop you off¨. I said. Me and Caroline fell home on my new best friend. ¨I wonder what the scientist want¨ Caroline said. After that Caroline had a search of her own.It was fun finding my new best friend. I hope the villains don't come back when Caroline is on her search .
Levi
“Milly milly no way did you eat my chickens?” I said. My heart dropped and I covarde my eyes. I put my head into my hands and you won't believe that we had 5 chickens but my dog got 3 and we only have 2 but my sister's dog came. He got one of my chickens but it lived. Me and my dad got a chand we hugged it up to a shade tree and got a dog house and toys. And that night she went crazy. She wanted to go inside. She borks and jup and ivin wit crazy but we put the chickens in the pen. And we un huke her some time. We said that if I Get more chickens I'm making my chickens big so they fit in the pen with the rest. I will always watch my dog? Utow the chickens got out uf gin? Mily no haaaaaaaaaaa! The end?
“Milly milly no way did you eat my chickens?” I said. My heart dropped and I covarde my eyes. I put my head into my hands and you won't believe that we had 5 chickens but my dog got 3 and we only have 2 but my sister's dog came. He got one of my chickens but it lived. Me and my dad got a chand we hugged it up to a shade tree and got a dog house and toys. And that night she went crazy. She wanted to go inside. She borks and jup and ivin wit crazy but we put the chickens in the pen. And we un huke her some time. We said that if I Get more chickens I'm making my chickens big so they fit in the pen with the rest. I will always watch my dog? Utow the chickens got out uf gin? Mily no haaaaaaaaaaa! The end?
Monk and the Lost Horse Bone
Xen
Once upon a time I walked out my back door with my best poch Monkey alley . We walked to my treehouse which wasn't far .I took out his horse bone and his favorite book “ Bad Kitty gets a Bath.” This little couch potato was brown with white spots , a little slobbery nose , a loud bark , fur like pillows and needles , and scrumptious brown eyes. When ... we started twisting and turning , the walls got smaller, a window busted. When we landed we were in a hot place with lots of catie and sand … The deseret! “Orrwww ,” Monk wimpers . “Orrww,” he whimpers again . “ Where's your bone Fluff ball?” I asked . That must have been what made the window break . Everything was fine until thump, thump ,bang ,bang crashing across the sandy savana sounding like thunder “Elephants”! I screamed . They were about to kill us as I jumped to the side and grabbed my little fur friend. As I wiped the sweat of my forehead . Wind started and went with it and wisping sand went with it . Were getting forced to come closer. Monk Monk needs his bone he's turning blue ! Oh no not again a polka dotted animal long neck and legs comping the ground grafes with a little baby ! What did I just see your bone on that baby grafe or am I hallucinating . I race for the giraffes . Hip hip hooray ! The baby had the bone .When I got back I was wiping off more sweat . All that matters is that monk is happy .He was so happy that he almost bit my hand off reaching for it ! More sand started spinning and again we were going with it when we landed we were at home with the horses neighing and the chickens chirping. Now his favorite story is baby giraffe and the horse bone . Now that's my favorite memory. The little animal made monk happy.
The Two Brothers
Elias
One Day me ,and my big brother were going to play ball. I was the blue team, and my brother and the red team.Then we started to play.I was having glory. Then it was back to when I was hot has lava. I drinked all the water my brother asked me where are the water?I told him and the trash as he looked at the trash. I felt blue if he was going to tell dad that I finished the water. He looked at me like a rhino. He threw his hands in the air as he looked at me. He told me to buy him some water so I agreed because he's my older brother. Day two the battle One morning I went to the bathroom. When I went to my brother's room I saw my brother destroying my lego so I destroyed his lego. We both were mad at each other like a wild dog. We both had it a fight I was winning but and a minute of go my brother made me a chokeslam. Is went you care somebody and the thrud and slams you and the back. So I got back up and cared him to the burch. And I pushed him of don’t worry I pushed him at the pool. The bad news is that he hates getting wet. So when he got out of the pool he ran torched me as a medeor. Then we got grondid when I looked out the window. It was are ready night. Day three the fun day One morning I went to the kitchen to make bread fresh. I saw my brother crying I looked outside and I fet blue tears came out my eyes as rain. In it was that my dog died. I told my brother he's going to watch us from the sky. My brother agreed so we started doing the pancakes. It helped just a little. We gave the pancakes to my dad. So we told my dad if he could take us to the water park. My father said, “Maybe but if you started to fight we well never ever go to the water park okay. “ We both said we promise. So we got all the stuff that we use for the water park. It took us 1 hour to go there and we had a lot of fun. My brother said ``Sunday is always fun. He said I agreed. It took 6 hour to go back home. We had 5 hour of fun and it took us 1 hour to go back home. My brother came to me with a gift. I told him what's the problem. I asked him, ``Ooh not thank I was just wondering if we could be friends, he said”. I told him okay .Then I said” what's with the gift. I said ooooh my brother said with a happy face.Then he said it's for you he said okay if I don,t like it it's going to be for you. My brother agreed it's just a gift but I nowa your going to like it he said. I got the gift and had a little peek. When I got a little peek I loved it it was a hoverboard. I always wanted did that. The first thing I did is I played with it all the days. Day 4 the friends And all the morning I drive the hoverboard to do the pancakes that's why my brother calls me the lazy boy.Thats how we became friends for the week and we promised that we will never ever fight. That's how the two brothers became friends forever and never became bad guys to each other.
Elias
One Day me ,and my big brother were going to play ball. I was the blue team, and my brother and the red team.Then we started to play.I was having glory. Then it was back to when I was hot has lava. I drinked all the water my brother asked me where are the water?I told him and the trash as he looked at the trash. I felt blue if he was going to tell dad that I finished the water. He looked at me like a rhino. He threw his hands in the air as he looked at me. He told me to buy him some water so I agreed because he's my older brother. Day two the battle One morning I went to the bathroom. When I went to my brother's room I saw my brother destroying my lego so I destroyed his lego. We both were mad at each other like a wild dog. We both had it a fight I was winning but and a minute of go my brother made me a chokeslam. Is went you care somebody and the thrud and slams you and the back. So I got back up and cared him to the burch. And I pushed him of don’t worry I pushed him at the pool. The bad news is that he hates getting wet. So when he got out of the pool he ran torched me as a medeor. Then we got grondid when I looked out the window. It was are ready night. Day three the fun day One morning I went to the kitchen to make bread fresh. I saw my brother crying I looked outside and I fet blue tears came out my eyes as rain. In it was that my dog died. I told my brother he's going to watch us from the sky. My brother agreed so we started doing the pancakes. It helped just a little. We gave the pancakes to my dad. So we told my dad if he could take us to the water park. My father said, “Maybe but if you started to fight we well never ever go to the water park okay. “ We both said we promise. So we got all the stuff that we use for the water park. It took us 1 hour to go there and we had a lot of fun. My brother said ``Sunday is always fun. He said I agreed. It took 6 hour to go back home. We had 5 hour of fun and it took us 1 hour to go back home. My brother came to me with a gift. I told him what's the problem. I asked him, ``Ooh not thank I was just wondering if we could be friends, he said”. I told him okay .Then I said” what's with the gift. I said ooooh my brother said with a happy face.Then he said it's for you he said okay if I don,t like it it's going to be for you. My brother agreed it's just a gift but I nowa your going to like it he said. I got the gift and had a little peek. When I got a little peek I loved it it was a hoverboard. I always wanted did that. The first thing I did is I played with it all the days. Day 4 the friends And all the morning I drive the hoverboard to do the pancakes that's why my brother calls me the lazy boy.Thats how we became friends for the week and we promised that we will never ever fight. That's how the two brothers became friends forever and never became bad guys to each other.
The Puppy in the Box
Ella Grace
I have seen this box a lot of times. That I have not paid a ticen to but today it caught my eye. The box said help me on it and it is on the side of the road. I said,” Can we stop ples?” Dad said '' Why? “ I said'' because it says help me on it’’ dad said “fine” scrrrrrrrrrrrr the car went. I saw a blak fluff ball. She was so dirty and and had a lot of fleas. A sone as I laid eyes on her I fell in love with her humongous brown eyes . Her gigatin paws grand me down . She is so clumsy. She is not big, she is a medium size dog. I love this fre ball so much she is the best !!!! She is so sweet . She loves to swim.I was frightened to ask my granny because she already had 3 dogs.Than we arrived at my granny hose.I held the fluff ball with lots and then we were on the poch. The puppy was shaking. We walked into the hose. My granny was sitting in her carar . I said “ can we keep her ‘’ she said “ let me thank a dot it “ I said “ I will never ask again for anything. And then I heard a soft yes. I jupt up saying “yes yes yes thank you thank you!” She is wagging her tell it is so adorable.I am so happy my granny said “yes” I have got to give you a bath “ uch” my brother said. Get in the tub splash splash hahahaha my mom said “ she has fleas” my smile was up to my eres. I can tell the puppy is happy to. She was wagging her tell and giving me lots of kisses and barking. Her barking sounds like a squeaking toy. My cheeks was like a strobere. I felt like I can swime across a ocean I felt like I was going to pass out with all of the the cuteness of the puppy!!!! It looked like the puppy was smiling. She is the best dog in the world. My granny was smiling with love.my pops face turned red like a volcano. He said “ hoos raggedy dog is that” I said “ mine” pop said”where is she living”I said “ right here” pop said “ who said she can!” granny “ I said” pop “ No” he yelled I started crying me “ ples ples ples ples ples”pop said” let me thank adonit” I said“I will do the crose for a week” pop said “ fine you can keep her but this is the last one” I said ‘ ok” I said with a smillie.She love to play but when it is bedtime she is a couch potato and will not get up. I wish I could have 111,000 dogs. I will never forget that time I saw the box. I am so happy I found her. the end I hope you like my storey.
Ella Grace
I have seen this box a lot of times. That I have not paid a ticen to but today it caught my eye. The box said help me on it and it is on the side of the road. I said,” Can we stop ples?” Dad said '' Why? “ I said'' because it says help me on it’’ dad said “fine” scrrrrrrrrrrrr the car went. I saw a blak fluff ball. She was so dirty and and had a lot of fleas. A sone as I laid eyes on her I fell in love with her humongous brown eyes . Her gigatin paws grand me down . She is so clumsy. She is not big, she is a medium size dog. I love this fre ball so much she is the best !!!! She is so sweet . She loves to swim.I was frightened to ask my granny because she already had 3 dogs.Than we arrived at my granny hose.I held the fluff ball with lots and then we were on the poch. The puppy was shaking. We walked into the hose. My granny was sitting in her carar . I said “ can we keep her ‘’ she said “ let me thank a dot it “ I said “ I will never ask again for anything. And then I heard a soft yes. I jupt up saying “yes yes yes thank you thank you!” She is wagging her tell it is so adorable.I am so happy my granny said “yes” I have got to give you a bath “ uch” my brother said. Get in the tub splash splash hahahaha my mom said “ she has fleas” my smile was up to my eres. I can tell the puppy is happy to. She was wagging her tell and giving me lots of kisses and barking. Her barking sounds like a squeaking toy. My cheeks was like a strobere. I felt like I can swime across a ocean I felt like I was going to pass out with all of the the cuteness of the puppy!!!! It looked like the puppy was smiling. She is the best dog in the world. My granny was smiling with love.my pops face turned red like a volcano. He said “ hoos raggedy dog is that” I said “ mine” pop said”where is she living”I said “ right here” pop said “ who said she can!” granny “ I said” pop “ No” he yelled I started crying me “ ples ples ples ples ples”pop said” let me thank adonit” I said“I will do the crose for a week” pop said “ fine you can keep her but this is the last one” I said ‘ ok” I said with a smillie.She love to play but when it is bedtime she is a couch potato and will not get up. I wish I could have 111,000 dogs. I will never forget that time I saw the box. I am so happy I found her. the end I hope you like my storey.
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Spine Shock the hedgehog is a cute little spike ball that Daniel and his parents drove all the way to Tennessee to get him. He is a 3 month old hedgehog his back is so brown it looks like chocolate and tree bark mixed together. As soon as Spine was on top of Daniel’s lap he fell into a deep slumber and when that happened Daniel knew that they were going to be like father and son. Spine has gorgeous eyes both so bright one sky blue and one hazel. -Gavin
Spine Shock the hedgehog is a cute little spike ball that Daniel and his parents drove all the way to Tennessee to get him. He is a 3 month old hedgehog his back is so brown it looks like chocolate and tree bark mixed together. As soon as Spine was on top of Daniel’s lap he fell into a deep slumber and when that happened Daniel knew that they were going to be like father and son. Spine has gorgeous eyes both so bright one sky blue and one hazel. -Gavin
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Sooner or later my daddy and neighbor pulled up in the driveway. I raced outside and opened the door to see 2 precious milk chocolate puppies in a small cage in the back seat. They were wagging their nubby little tails and yipping and whining so I had to open the cage and greet my best friend for life! The minute I saw them I fell in love. -Eli
Sooner or later my daddy and neighbor pulled up in the driveway. I raced outside and opened the door to see 2 precious milk chocolate puppies in a small cage in the back seat. They were wagging their nubby little tails and yipping and whining so I had to open the cage and greet my best friend for life! The minute I saw them I fell in love. -Eli